From b1bce4ca4eb9f37d6f17ab980d8ee8d0dd0dd399 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Aleksandr Prokudin Date: Sat, 31 May 2025 11:18:24 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Fix grammar (#1535) --- docs/v1.md | 4 ++-- docs/v2.md | 4 ++-- docs/v3.md | 8 ++++---- docs/v4.md | 26 +++++++++++++------------- 4 files changed, 21 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/v1.md b/docs/v1.md index bd468e19..fbf6ac34 100644 --- a/docs/v1.md +++ b/docs/v1.md @@ -1,9 +1,9 @@ --- -title: DIY PiKVM V1 quick start guide +title: DIY PiKVM V1 quickstart guide description: Getting started with PiKVM V1 --- -# DIY PiKVM V1 quick start guide +# DIY PiKVM V1 quickstart guide !!! tip "So many choices!" There are many different options with sub-items, so you can choose what will suit you.
diff --git a/docs/v2.md b/docs/v2.md index 224f7fbd..6e7b7f66 100644 --- a/docs/v2.md +++ b/docs/v2.md @@ -1,9 +1,9 @@ --- -title: DIY PiKVM V2 quick start guide +title: DIY PiKVM V2 quickstart guide description: Getting started with PiKVM V2 --- -# DIY PiKVM V2 quick start guide +# DIY PiKVM V2 quickstart guide !!! tip "So many choices!" There are many different options with sub-items, so you can choose what will suit you.
diff --git a/docs/v3.md b/docs/v3.md index 98831bed..6b84263a 100644 --- a/docs/v3.md +++ b/docs/v3.md @@ -1,15 +1,15 @@ --- -title: PiKVM V3 HAT & pre-assembled quick start +title: PiKVM V3 HAT & pre-assembled quickstart guide description: Getting started with PiKVM V3 & pre-assembled --- -# PiKVM V3 HAT & pre-assembled quick start +# PiKVM V3 HAT & pre-assembled quickstart guide ![PiKVM V3 HAT](assembled.jpg "PiKVM V3 HAT"){ width="450" } -PiKVM is a feature-rich, production grade, open-source, Raspberry Pi based KVM over IP device. It allows you to turn on/off or restart your computer, configure the UEFI/BIOS, and even reinstall the OS using the Virtual CD-ROM or Flash Drive. +PiKVM is a feature-rich, production-grade, open-source, Raspberry Pi based KVM-over-IP device. It allows you to turn your computer on or off, restart it, configure the UEFI/BIOS, and even reinstall the OS using the Virtual CD-ROM or flash drive. -You can use your remote keyboard and mouse or PiKVM can simulate a keyboard, mouse, and a monitor, which are then presented in a web browser as if you were working on a remote system directly. +PiKVM uses your remote keyboard and mouse to simulate a local keyboard, mouse, and monitor, which are then presented in a web browser as if you were working on a remote system directly. PiKVM V3 is available in two version: diff --git a/docs/v4.md b/docs/v4.md index 5d9d4135..ca1c9017 100644 --- a/docs/v4.md +++ b/docs/v4.md @@ -1,15 +1,15 @@ --- -title: PiKVM V4 Mini & Plus quick start +title: PiKVM V4 Mini & Plus quickstart guide description: Getting started with PiKVM V4 Mini & Plus --- -# PiKVM V4 Mini & Plus quick start +# PiKVM V4 Mini & Plus quickstart guide ![PiKVM V4 Mini & Plus](overview.jpg "PiKVM V4 Mini (left) & Plus (right)"){ width="450" } -PiKVM is a feature-rich, production grade, open-source, Raspberry Pi based KVM over IP device. It allows you to turn on/off or restart your computer, configure the UEFI/BIOS, and even reinstall the OS using the Virtual CD-ROM or Flash Drive. +PiKVM is a feature-rich, production-grade, open-source, Raspberry Pi based KVM-over-IP device. It allows you to turn your computer on or off, restart it, configure the UEFI/BIOS, and even reinstall the OS using the Virtual CD-ROM or flash drive. -You can use your remote keyboard and mouse or PiKVM can simulate a keyboard, mouse, and a monitor, which are then presented in a web browser as if you were working on a remote system directly. +PiKVM uses your remote keyboard and mouse to simulate a local keyboard, mouse, and monitor, which are then presented in a web browser as if you were working on a remote system directly. **Datasheets**: @@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ After turning on the power, PiKVM OS generates unique SSH keys and certificates The operating system on your remote computer will treat PiKVM as an additional display and use it in the Extend mode by default. That's why you will see an empty desktop when you first connect. -To avoid that, go to the display settings in your remote computer's operating system and enable the mirror mode for the external screen that you operating system identifies as PiKVM. Refer to your operating system's documentation on that. +To avoid that, go to the display settings in your remote computer's operating system and enable the mirror mode for the external screen that your operating system identifies as PiKVM. Refer to your operating system's documentation on that. ### Access PiKVM @@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ Submit the default credentials and click **Login**: - Password: `admin` - 2FA Code: disabled by default, skip this field -You will see the initial dashboard screen of the PiKVM where you can access the remote host, connect to the PiKVM command line, or log out: +You will see the initial dashboard screen of the PiKVM, where you can access the remote host, connect to the PiKVM command line, or log out: ![Initial UI](initial-ui.png){ width="450" } @@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ To do that: $ su - ``` - When prompted for password, use `root`. + When prompted for a password, use `root`. 3. Run `rw` to change the access to the SD card to the write mode: @@ -219,17 +219,17 @@ To do that: ----- ## Important next steps -- **We strongly recommend to update the PiKVM OS** after the first launch: +- **We strongly recommend updating the PiKVM OS** after the first launch: {!_update_os.md!} -- Learn about basics of **PiKVM OS Configuration**: where to find configs, how to edit the, etc. +- Learn the basics of **PiKVM OS Configuration**: where to find configs, how to edit the, etc. {!_config.md!} - **Get to know PiKVM Web UI**: read [this help section](webui.md) to better understand all the possibilities of the web user interface. -- **Set up [ATX connection](atx_board.md)** if you need to control the power of the remote system. +- **Set up an [ATX connection](atx_board.md)** if you need to control the power of the remote system. ----- @@ -245,7 +245,7 @@ To do that: 2. **Configure hardware**: - - Install and set up Wi-Fi antenna: + - Install and set up the Wi-Fi antenna: ??? note "Quick WiFi antenna how-to" @@ -322,9 +322,9 @@ To do that: ----- ## Known issues and limitations -* There may be compatibility issues with some motherboards, such as **HP** or **DELL**. If there is no image from the BIOS, you can fine-tune the HDMI settings, but it is possible that the mass storage devices will not be available in the BIOS. In the latter case, [USB dynamic configuration](usb.md) will solve the problem. +* There may be compatibility issues with certain motherboards, such as **HP** or **DELL**. If there is no image from the BIOS, you can fine-tune the HDMI settings, but it is possible that mass storage devices may not be available in the BIOS. In the latter case, [USB dynamic configuration](usb.md) will solve the problem. -* While there is a Mini-PCIe slot in the V4 Plus, it was only designed for LTE modems. An NVME card will not work. +* While the V4 Plus features a Mini-PCIe slot, it was only designed for LTE modems. An NVME card will not work. -----